In this project, I really admire you, because you can create such a unified style but different shapes of flower patterns, each of them has a different dynamic.
It looks like there are really many flowers swaying with the wind. I think you are really good at creating loose, flowing lines. This really has your style, and more uniform colors have advantages and disadvantages. Less colors make your entire series look more complete, but it is also a bit monotonous, maybe you can try to add more color combinations, as you said to me. In the end, I really like your series of works very much.

This is really great work. Your two series of works each have a very distinctive personal style. In the “Talking Colors”, a large number of rich and pure colors are used, which can catch people’s eyes and immerse yourself in the colors you create. In your work, you have drawn a lot of irregular fruits or shops. Trying to create in a way that does not limit the shape is really worth learning. You used many kinds of painting tools to complete your series of paintings. From this, it can be seen that you have a lot of creative experience and because of your experience, every painting looks very complete.

In Task 1, I like the style of large-scale painting，which makes the picture richer with stronger visual impact. The paintings are very successful. Through your work, it can be seen that the mixed use of colored crayons and colored pencils is your advantage. You can use the characteristics of crayons to draw the texture of different objects very well, such as broken chair sign, three-legged dog outside, waitress, face mask, faces, etc. I especially like your face mask work. The eyes and mouth are drawn with colored pencils to draw the delicate skin, and Using black crayon to draw stiff masks, so that the overall picture has a strong contrast and impact. In addition, the colors used are also very bold, which can attract the attention of the viewers and led a deep impression on me. The faces work’s texture is very interesting, In this work you can change the texture by mixing lumps form and collages. I suggest that you can explore with more expressive forms and painting techniques about crayons and colorful pencils in the next work. For example, using decorative painting techniques.
I like your series of works very much, and the colors and composition of the paintings are interesting and fun. I believe you will have fun in the process.

In Task 2, it is very interesting to use Photoshop to develop existing works and get new patterns. I really like your colors and the further patterns obtained by PS, which is very creative, full of your own style and characteristics. I suggest that you can use different observation methods to get more textures or patterns of drawing, then develop and create new patterns.

I learn from your works that it is very interesting to draw large-scale paintings. This will help me to paint more details and make my works more impact. I also want to make my work more personal. I can practice a lot in my own works to find my own style and characteristics.

I really like your works and your drawing style. As for the task of ways of Seeing, I think you have well chosen two places to complete this task, one is indoor, the other is outdoor, so that things and environments can be observed in a completely different way. For example, if you paint a lot of fun in the museum’s shadow, I can see a lot from your painting similar shadow the same color and color piece, you finally presented in the paper that we see them is like a complete printing, but I think the only fly in the ointment is you use too much black, maybe next time you can choose more appropriate color to express the things you want to express. In the bench area you choose in the park, you have observed the bench and the plants around it from different distances and angles. I think this way of observation is very good, because the forms presented by different angles and distances are quite different. From your painting, I think your painting techniques and techniques are very bold. I can see that you have used a lot of different painting tools to combine, which has enriched the picture a lot. In the task of talking Colors, you have found a lot of beautiful scenery around you and found that the colors of natural scenes and landscapes can be applied to your own paintings. I can see from your painting that you used a lot of colors and painted some details. I really like the light-colored watercolor you put together, which makes me feel comfortable. You have also experimented with different ways of using watercolor, which is really great because you can find many different things and make a difference on the paper.

I really enjoyed how this blog has some sort of connection throughout, linking all of the experimentations to each other. Even though each piece is quite different in inspiration and colour scheme, they all appear to be from the same collection; due to the technique used and the addition of fine line details. The artist used many different mediums and overlapped them to create dimension and depth, I would’ve liked to see some drawings that didn’t include the fine black lines, as lovely as they are, they just got a bit too repetitive. I thoroughly enjoyed how the artist created a digital repeat of the perfume bottle drawing, it turned out to be an extremely interesting print. The artist also inspired me to use collaging, I was especially drawn to the combinations of mediums and textures. I also really enjoyed the drawings of the everyday objects and belongings, they added personality to the drawings and I thought the fridge drawings in particular were extremely detailed and rustic. However I would still like to see some drawings that didn’t involve the black fine lines, just a bit looser and messier like the drawing of the scrunchie and the underground using oil pastels. Overall I was certainly impressed and inspired and I believe that the artist has accomplished the task at hand effortlessly.

I really like your drawing style and how you’ve used a range of tight detailed drawings with more loose abstract mark making, especially the use of pastels to create a different texture, all of the colours work really well together and I like the themes of floral and architecture in your work, and how this is based upon the poorer areas of your environment and the effect this had on the rough tools you used. I can see for task two you’ve done drawings from different perspectives by zooming in on objects and your drawings look like they’ve been made for a textiles / pattern purpose. I like how you’ve clearly gone out of your comfort zone to use new materials and techniques and the range of processes can be seen in both of your tasks. In task 2 the start of a pattern project is clear maybe for future it would be nice to use some fabrics in your collages or layer with different textures. Overall, I love the project and your unique drawing style.

I loved looking through your blog posts as your drawings have a lot of technical skill and are quite detailed, I can see that you took time to focus on the textures of the things you were drawing from. The ‘Talking Colour’ task was really exciting to look through as you used lots of different mediums to draw with and so your outcomes are all very different to each other. I loved the painting of the lotus seedpod most, as the colours you used work together in combination really well and you have shown the different shapes and line inside the seedpod in detail. For the second task I thought your drawing of cracks in marker and hook line pen was really beautiful with all the different types of line and mark making. The style you used to create the mountains you were drawing is really interesting and abstract, and could translate really well onto fabric. You could develop these drawings into a 3D form by working with clay or something similar as I feel like you would be able to show the depth and appearance of the surface of the mountain well this way. For your ‘Ways of Seeing’ task you have used a good range of materials and techniques, although you could also experiment with colour more so that you have a more varied colour palette. You have been really productive in both the tasks as you have produced a range of high quality drawings that look at items and still lives from different points of perspective which will be good practice for developing you drawings in future projects.

I really enjoyed looking through both of your tasks. The leaves, pebbles, walnuts, landscapes and fish painting shows you have sourced inspiration from a wide variety of nature. The blue and grey textured piece from enlarged stones is so interesting and has a lot of depth and it’s very realistic just like a photograph! You have portrayed texture really evidently throughout your work. My favorite piece is the kiwi fruit. The dark background looks amazing against the bright green and the fruits bounce off the page catching my attention.  The autumn leaves are fantastic as I can see that they look crunchy and three-dimensional and the use of collaging in your drawings is great. In your talking pattern task, The abstract style of your models are very interesting and adds a new perspective of autumn that I hadn’t thought of before. The colored silk poking out from the twigs is really original and I can see that being developed into a new series of print and sculpture ideas. As well as the abstract stone, the print is unique and matches the irregular shape of the rock which ties in with that abstract feeling.

To develop your work further, I would suggest drawing the kiwi fruit in different colours like yellow or pink and adding a layer of paint texture and also experiment with the fish paintings by maybe giving them a ‘scales’ or ’seaweed’ textured background like you did with the autumn leaves.

Overall, you have experimented with a broad range of mediums and that is something you can continue doing in future projects.