Abigail Priolo intro to peer feedback for Yuanfei Ye – Tasks 1 and 2


I really like your drawing style and how you’ve used a range of tight detailed drawings with more loose abstract mark making, especially the use of pastels to create a different texture, all of the colours work really well together and I like the themes of floral and architecture in your work, and how this is based upon the poorer areas of your environment and the effect this had on the rough tools you used. I can see for task two you’ve done drawings from different perspectives by zooming in on objects and your drawings look like they’ve been made for a textiles / pattern purpose. I like how you’ve clearly gone out of your comfort zone to use new materials and techniques and the range of processes can be seen in both of your tasks. In task 2 the start of a pattern project is clear maybe for future it would be nice to use some fabrics in your collages or layer with different textures. Overall, I love the project and your unique drawing style.
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